Friday, November 16, 2012

The Haunted Barn

It was a cold dim night. The wind was howling, and cold shivers went up my spine as I reached the creepy barn.  I stepped into the barn with goose bumps climbing up my legs.  All of a sudden I felt a cold breeze go past me I started to feel like the barn was haunted.

 I tripped on something but I got up and saw a skeleton on the ground covered in cobwebs.  So I started to run for the door. The door shut and a pale scared farmer appeared out of nowhere then said “Why did you come to my barn"  I got scared and answered, "I was wondering what was in here."  

He replied, "Not good enough." He started flying to me at full speed like a train. I looked up in fright and found a vacuum that looked like the one from ghostbusters. Guest what happened... it didn’t work.

I started to get scared and then an angel appeared and protected me. After that she said she was sent from the heavens to help with this bad spirit.  Finally it was gone and I as thanked the angel she started to disappear into to a bright light.

1 comment:

  1. Kia Ora Kaiden.....
    I think that this is a good narrative that you write. It was even more interesting that it was haunted. I think that it was cool you even brung an angel into this. And also you have used some good vocabulary like howling, cold breeze and so much more.
    Keep up the good work.
    From Kayde